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Celia Hodes and Dean Hodes

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bewildered_ronin
bewildered_ronin		 Celia Hodes and Dean Hodes
Apr 3 2008, 7:05 PM EDT
Both entries need to be rewritten with better sentence structure. The information is fine, but the entries really need to be rewritten. Preferably trying to keep the same "voice" as the rest of the entry.